I said Iโll be there by your side
Watching and observing you all the time
Of all the promises, you made
One was to hear me all the time
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So listen, I ask you to let me go
Not because, I no more want to be at your side
But, because you said
โPrecious things are meant to loseโ
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You gave me all your light
So now itโs your time to shine
This storm can not erode you
And this pain can never stop you
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Remember, you are not alone
So, think of you and shape yourself
Maybe, I can no more be your side
But I promise, Iโll always be within you
Iโll always be within you
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—Aanchal Parmar
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Hope you all are doing well. Thanks a lot for reading. Have a great time. Keep shining ๐ซ๐ซ
Great mesmerizing poetry ,Aanchal !I liked it so much !Keep it up !God bless you๐
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Thanks a lot for your kind words. Glad to know you liked it. Truly means a lot
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My pleasure
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Aanchal, I am waiting for your response to my last two posts- my first attempt at poetry! Take your time ๐๐พ
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Ah, I’m so sorry. It’s been long. I really missed a lot of posts. Hope I will get along soon.
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No problem! You will catch up soon๐
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Aanchal, this is simply amazing!! I absolutely loved it. The soothing flow and authentic emotion is so lovely to read, I could feel each of your words. Your poetry is always a gift in many ways, thank you for shining your bright light! ๐ค๐คโจ
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Oh friend, thanks a lot. Your comment always makes me grateful of what I’m doing. So kind of you to say my written words as a gift. Truly means a lot. You are truly incredible. Thanks again
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Heartbreakingly beautiful, Aanchal. โค๏ธ
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Thank you so much for stopping by and reading it ๐โค๏ธ
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Always a pleasure โค๏ธ๐
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Beautifully written. ๐ค
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At my highs knowing you liked it. Thank you ๐
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You’re most welcome, my friend. Always. ๐
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Lots of beauty within these lines!
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That’s so kind of you to say that. Thanks a lot,๐
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Beautiful expression Aanchal..
Life is well explained through poetry.
Being together, moving away and still being felt in thoughts and actions that is how life goes on.
Stay blessed always.
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Thank you so much for your kind words
And thank you even more for leaving such deep and profound thoughts here. I totally agree with you.
Wish the same for you. Have a good day ahead.
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This is so beautiful Aanchal. Very touching!
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Thanks a bunch for your inspiring words ๐๐
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Wow, this is so emotional and aesthetic! Wonderful, touching poem! Simply beautiful!
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Aw, thanks a lot. That’s so sweet of you to say that. Glad to know you liked it. Thanks again ๐โค๏ธ
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Very well penned… liked it a lot…
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Thank you. Glad to know you liked it ๐๐
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Your words are very moving and your post is beautiful.
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That’s so kind of you to say that. Thanks a lot ๐๐โค๏ธ
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What beautiful words of truth in love expressed in your poem. Truly wonderfully done๐
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That’s so kind of you to say that. I appreciate it. Thanks a lot ๐โฃ๏ธ
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amazing yaarr Aanchal I just loved it…โค๏ธโค๏ธ every lines are heart touching..
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Thank you so much my dear Akansha. Your love and beautiful words mean a lot to me . I’ve been so fortunate to find an incredible friend like you โค๏ธ
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Beautiful emotional poem. Well written ๐๐โฃ๏ธ๐น
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That’s so kind of you to say that ๐โค๏ธ
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My pleasure ๐๐stay happy and blessed forever ๐๐๐
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Wow! I am speechless. Words can’t express how much I liked this. This is so deep and heartfelt. Really great!!
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That’s so sweet of you to say that. Thanks a bunch ๐โค๏ธ
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A truly unselfish gesture that many cannot honestly do.
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Thank you for your inspiring words and beautiful understanding.
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Is your blog still active? Itโs been a year since youโve posted here.
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