POETRY XI — WITHIN YOU

I said I’ll be there by your side
Watching and observing you all the time
Of all the promises, you made
One was to hear me all the time

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So listen, I ask you to let me go
Not because, I no more want to be at your side
But, because you said
β€œPrecious things are meant to lose”

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You gave me all your light
So now it’s your time to shine
This storm can not erode you
And this pain can never stop you

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Remember, you are not alone
So, think of you and shape yourself
Maybe, I can no more be your side
But I promise, I’ll always be within you
I’ll always be within you

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Aanchal Parmar

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Hope you all are doing well. Thanks a lot for reading. Have a great time. Keep shining πŸ’«πŸ’«

39 Comments

  1. Great mesmerizing poetry ,Aanchal !I liked it so much !Keep it up !God bless youπŸ˜€

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    1. Thanks a lot for your kind words. Glad to know you liked it. Truly means a lot

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    2. Aanchal, I am waiting for your response to my last two posts- my first attempt at poetry! Take your time πŸ™πŸΎ

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      1. Ah, I’m so sorry. It’s been long. I really missed a lot of posts. Hope I will get along soon.

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      2. No problem! You will catch up soonπŸ‘

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  2. Ace says:

    Aanchal, this is simply amazing!! I absolutely loved it. The soothing flow and authentic emotion is so lovely to read, I could feel each of your words. Your poetry is always a gift in many ways, thank you for shining your bright light! πŸ–€πŸ€—βœ¨

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    1. Oh friend, thanks a lot. Your comment always makes me grateful of what I’m doing. So kind of you to say my written words as a gift. Truly means a lot. You are truly incredible. Thanks again

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  3. Heartbreakingly beautiful, Aanchal. ❀️

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    1. Thank you so much for stopping by and reading it 😊❀️

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      1. Always a pleasure ❀️😊

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  4. Jeff Flesch says:

    Beautifully written. πŸ€—

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    1. At my highs knowing you liked it. Thank you 😊

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      1. Jeff Flesch says:

        You’re most welcome, my friend. Always. 😊

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  5. Lots of beauty within these lines!

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    1. That’s so kind of you to say that. Thanks a lot,😊

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  6. Jas krish says:

    Beautiful expression Aanchal..
    Life is well explained through poetry.
    Being together, moving away and still being felt in thoughts and actions that is how life goes on.
    Stay blessed always.
    πŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸ™

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words
      And thank you even more for leaving such deep and profound thoughts here. I totally agree with you.
      Wish the same for you. Have a good day ahead.

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      1. Jas krish says:

        πŸ™πŸ™

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  7. This is so beautiful Aanchal. Very touching!

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    1. Thanks a bunch for your inspiring words πŸ˜ŠπŸ™

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  8. SamSahana says:

    Wow, this is so emotional and aesthetic! Wonderful, touching poem! Simply beautiful!

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    1. Aw, thanks a lot. That’s so sweet of you to say that. Glad to know you liked it. Thanks again 😊❀️

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  9. Ashish kumar says:

    Very well penned… liked it a lot…

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    1. Thank you. Glad to know you liked it πŸ™πŸ˜Š

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  10. BERNADETTE says:

    Your words are very moving and your post is beautiful.

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    1. That’s so kind of you to say that. Thanks a lot πŸ˜ŠπŸ™β€οΈ

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  11. What beautiful words of truth in love expressed in your poem. Truly wonderfully doneπŸ’–

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    1. That’s so kind of you to say that. I appreciate it. Thanks a lot 😊❣️

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  12. Akanksha Mehta says:

    amazing yaarr Aanchal I just loved it…❀️❀️ every lines are heart touching..

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    1. Thank you so much my dear Akansha. Your love and beautiful words mean a lot to me . I’ve been so fortunate to find an incredible friend like you ❀️

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  13. Priti says:

    Beautiful emotional poem. Well written πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜Šβ£οΈπŸŒΉ

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    1. That’s so kind of you to say that 😊❀️

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      1. Priti says:

        My pleasure πŸ’“πŸŽ‰stay happy and blessed forever πŸ™πŸŽ‰πŸ˜Š

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  14. Wow! I am speechless. Words can’t express how much I liked this. This is so deep and heartfelt. Really great!!

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    1. That’s so sweet of you to say that. Thanks a bunch 😊❀️

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  15. usfman says:

    A truly unselfish gesture that many cannot honestly do.

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  16. Thank you for your inspiring words and beautiful understanding.

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  17. usfman says:

    Is your blog still active? It’s been a year since you’ve posted here.

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