I know, this moment you’re living feels so tragic
The moment
Where everything seems so impossible
And end seems the only way
The moment
Where grief makes you feel so numb
And the emptiness feels so despised
The moment
Where ship of humanity appears to be drowning
And dying with thirst feels like only option
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But remember, my dear
This fire can not burn you
For this is meant to shine
This ice can not freeze you
For this is meant to comfort you
This ocean can not drown you
For your depth of thoughts exceeds the depth of these waves
And this moment can never break you
For your will is stronger than your tough times
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Thank you for reading. Hope you all are doing well.
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–Aanchal Parmar
I am sure you might have dive into their struggling souls with emphasis to write so touching words in depth of heartfelt feelings. Last lines were amazing dear Anchal. Be blessed with much more beautiful thoughts n knowledge. Loves to you β€
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I’m not really sure about that . That’s really so kind of you to say that. I see myself as a highly incompetent and incapable person for now. I really believe these suffering souls are more than super heroes not willing to give up and it really makes me feel so privileged that there’s still opportunity and good life for us, same goes with responsibility. There’s a lot for everyone to do.
I’m glad, I was able to pass my message to you. Thanks a lot for such pure and precious wishes . More love and power to you β€οΈ. Hope you are doing great. π
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Yes dear, there’s always a hope and opportunity n you did a great work. I am doing good with the grace of God. Wishing for you the same sweetest one π₯°β€
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Excellent post and have great weekend.
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Thank you. Glad you liked it. Wish you the same. Have a wonderful day ππ
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interesting thoughts! Letβs hope our will is really stronger and we turn away from our path of destruction and decide to survive! Well presented in poetry!
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Very beautifully said. Thank you for reading and letting us know your amazing thoughts. Let’s do our best for that. Thanks again ππ
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Aanchal, this is so deeply beautiful! Such empowering, inspiring and breathtaking lines…I absolutely love it. Your posts always touch my heart/soul, your light shines so brightly in every word you write! Keep up the amazing work, I know you will π€π€π«
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That’s so sweet of you to say that. At my highs knowing you felt that way. It really means a lot . You are absolutely so kind and supportive. Thank you πβ€οΈ
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What doesn’t kill us only makes us stronger. Such powerful and empowering lines, Aanchal. Beautifully written β₯οΈ
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Wow! Well said, dear friend. It does. It really makes us stronger and we learn a lot from this tough times, these are the times which makes us aware of our real strength but sometimes it breaks us into pieces too. It’s always matter of choice. But I guess, this is how everything works. Sorrow and joy go hand in hand, and same goes for life and death.
Thanks for such beautiful thought. Have a wonderful day π€β€οΈ
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Thank you, dear. I agree with you. Yes, dear Aanchal. It’s all about choices and perspectives. Well said! My pleasure. I hope you have a great week ahead of you. β€π€π
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This piece is so powerful….beautifully expressed, Aanchal β¨
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Thanks a lot for your kind words. Happy to know you liked it π
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You’re welcome β¨
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this expresses the innate beauty of human spirit..be prolific and unleash as much works you can.
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Your visit expresses the beauty of you . Greatful for your words . Thank you β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ
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A beautiful poem, Aanchal. Deep and wonderfully created and delivered, my friend. π
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Thank you so much dear friend for your priceless words. Means a lot ππ€
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You’re most welcome, Aanchal. Is always my pleasure. π€β€
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This is achingly beautiful! π₯Ίβ€οΈ
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That’s so sweet of you to say that. Thank you πβ£οΈ
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Really great poem!
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Thank you π
Delighted to know that.
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This is so beautiful and heartwarming!! A hopeful poem. Loved it!!
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Really? I really liked your approach . Thanks for such precious appreciation π
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It is truly my pleasure. You are most welcome!!π
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The amazing power of the senses can ease oneβs mind if they so choose. Nice tribute to those in despair.
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Thanks a lot for your encouraging words. Truly appreciate it ππ
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A beautiful and uplifting poem, Aanchal. I could really feel it β€
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That’s so kind of you to say that. Thank you so much. Means a lot ππβ€οΈ
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β For your will is stronger than your tough times . β β Aanchal Singh
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Whatβs the current status of this blog? Are you still writing?
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Glad to see you here . Sorry, but no I’m not writing, but sooner I will. Thanks a lot for asking. Really means a lot and i apologise wholeheartedly for not being able to keep the updates
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Good to hear.
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Wow your words in poetry are incredible Aanchal.
So much truth and heart with an amazing message!
It truly penetrated deeply!
π awesome jobππ
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So beautiful! β€οΈπ
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Are we still writing blogs actively?
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Pure will, truth and courage build human beings strength.
A short and simple but powerful poem. πͺ
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So uplifting thanks dear π₯°
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Deep!! beautifully written β€
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