Poetry V – UNTITLED

You, you may say you’re hopeless

But you are not really the one

I know, you’ve got a lot to complain about.

And a lot more to argue 

I know, you’ve many secrets to hide

And many more to erase

I know you’ve got enough reasons to cry 

And more than enough to scream for 

I know you’ve got no hope in real life

But there’s still a place in imagination

And you surely can bring it to life

For there’s nothing that can stop you

For there’s still a desire holding you back 

Maybe it’s hidden deep inside or lost somewhere

All you need to do is to find it, imagine it and live it

Now, you may say you’re hopeless

But you are surely not the one…

-Aanchal Parmar 

Let your dreams sail and hope find its own way……

18 Comments

  1. ashok says:

    Beautiful Aanchal

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    1. Thank you sir πŸ€—

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      1. ashok says:

        My pleasure Aanchal πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—

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  2. Ashish kumar says:

    This is beautiful… Very good hopeful and optimistic poem… πŸ’―πŸ‘πŸ‘

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Thank you sir. Glad to know you liked it πŸ€—

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  3. Zina Hermez says:

    β€˜But there’s still a place in imagination
    And you surely can bring it to life,’
    how beautiful! I β™₯️ this!β™₯️

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Thanks a lot ma’am. It’s my pleasure you liked it……

      Liked by 1 person

  4. KK says:

    Good one πŸ‘Œ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you sir…
      I love reading your blogs……

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      1. KK says:

        My pleasure 😊

        Like

  5. Ace says:

    This is so truly beautiful, I absolutely love it. So glad to have found you and your work!!! πŸ€—πŸ–€

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Thank you for your beautiful and kind words. Hope you get to love more πŸ™ŒπŸ’ž

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      1. Ace says:

        Of course and I’m sure I will!!! πŸ€—πŸ–€

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  6. Dr.Sujatha says:

    This is so beautiful!πŸ™πŸ™‚

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Thank you for appreciating it πŸ™‚β€

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Jaba Paul says:

    Actually my parents and few relatives always tell me I’m hopeless . Sometimes they behave me like a hopeless thing. But I try to understand myself and try to be happy

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    1. You are not hopeless my dear friend, that’s what I said. We may feel like this but we all are precious and beautiful. Reading your blog’s make me think that you are beautiful and brave for you have the courage to say the words which many couldn’t. I’m glad that you can think of something while reading my poems …❣️❣️

      Like

      1. Jaba Paul says:

        Thank you πŸ™

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