Poetry X – ONE MORE DAY

Though you never said it to me
But I know you felt that way too
Though you tried your best to be my side
But I guess your love was not meant for me
Though we’ve been separated by the borders of loathe
But we still share the same sky
Though the nostalgic sentiments we shared have been eroded
But, remember you said few things never die

I know it was difficult and yet it is
But even in my last breath, I want you
I want your hands holding my thoughts
And your desires being fulfilled by you
I want you in the days
When you shine brighter than the suns
I want you in the nights
When your dreams have all turned dark and gloomy

So baby, let me love you for one more day
Let me miss you just for today
Maybe, we never showed our affection
But, I know we too carried too many unrelieved thoughts
So dear, hear me out for one more time
Let me love you for one more day ….


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It’s been long since I’ve posted anything and even longer since I read anyone’s blog. Sorry and I must say I really missed reading everyone’s writing. I hope I will catch soon . Hope you enjoyed the read . Have a great time. Thanks again…

-Aanchal Parmar

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    1. Thank you for your words πŸ˜ŠπŸ™

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  1. Ace says:

    So good to have you back, Aanchal!!!! I missed you and your incredible writing! This piece is absolutely beautiful. There’s such a magical flow and divine rhythm here, it’s just soothing to read. Amazingly well done, dear friend πŸ€—πŸ–€

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    1. Thanks a lot, friend for your words. I too missed a mojor part of my happiness in these two months, but not any more . Thanks a lot for your appreciation. I will get back to your blogs soon, it’s been long ..mmm

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      1. A poem that creeps up slowly, and holds tight… such a need is hard to deny…
        πŸ‡―πŸ‡²πŸ–οΈ

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  2. Sowmya says:

    Beautiful piece with lovely expressions Aanchal

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    1. Thank you for your encouraging words πŸ˜ŠπŸ™πŸ€

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  3. Such a heartfelt poem. This really tugged on my heartstrings. Beautifully written, Aanchal.. It’s been a long while!

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    1. That’s so sweet of you. Glad to know you felt that way ❀️🌹

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      1. You are welcome β€πŸ€—πŸ˜Š

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  4. A very unique and interesting take on the phrase β€˜one more day’.
    Keep it up!

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    1. Glad to hear that

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  5. Akanksha Mehta says:

    ❀️Once again you wrote a wonderful poem and your each and every words touched my heart ❀️. Just keep writing and never stop 😊😊…

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  6. Harbans says:

    Beautiful reflections.

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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      1. Harbans says:

        My pleasure. πŸ™‚

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  7. Aparna says:

    Good to see you again 😊
    Your come back was awesome ☺️

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    1. That’s so sweet of you to think that way. Thank you πŸ™‚πŸ€

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  8. Navin says:

    Beautifully expressed….

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    1. Anonymous says:

      ❀️❀️

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  9. Terveen Gill says:

    Sincere and loving words. πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you πŸ˜ŠπŸ™

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  10. I hear u says:

    Great piece dear.

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    1. Thank you. Glad to know you liked it

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      1. I hear u says:

        With pleasure dear

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