There were times when I was told not to cry
But I wished someone to wipe off my tearsΒ
There were times when I was scared to speak
But I wished someone to hear my voice
There were times when I hid my pain
But I wished someone to heal my wound
Yes, those were the times when I used pen and paper
Because I couldn’t pull a trigger
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Well, Today I wish I could go back and speak to myself , that
I was just lonely but not alone
I was just in a different route but not wrong
Yeah, I wish I could go back and collect my tears
Because I was too precious to cry…
— Aanchal Parmar
This is so pure and preciously beautiful! Well done, my friend! I absolutely love it, youβre such a talented writer π€π€
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Thank you for noticing it and ofcource thank you for your love and support. I feel great being called your friend. Sending loads of love to youπβ€β€
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hii Aanchan your blog contains a good feeling. happy to read
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Thank you so much for stopping by and reading it and above all taking time to appreciate it…. I will read more of yours….
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So beautiful Aanchal. I wish Aanchal happiest of times and love filled days with sunshine ππ€
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Thank you. It’s great hearing you that way. I wish the same for you. ππ
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Uhhh this so deep β€β€ loved it
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Thank you. I’m glad to hear that. πβ£
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Great post @aanchal. Cherished some childhood moments while reading.
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I’m glad you felt that way. It’s really great to hear that. Thank you.
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I think your thoughts flow rapidly, all the time. What are the reasons you have to be strongπͺ ?
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Very well writtenβ¦YBR
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Thank you for your appreciationπ
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(Because I was too precious to cryβ¦)β€π
Beautiful and pure ππ
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Ummm, Thank you. Glad to know you liked it.
Looking forward to read more of your blogs πβ€β€
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Love it π
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Thank you for stopping by and appreciating it…π
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There are so many things I want to tell 13 years old Loku.
It is always a good opportunity to try new things, believing in ourselves. That action gives us a lot of satisfaction and enjoyment.
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I agree. Learning never stops….. We should be a good reciever in order to learn everything we possibly can……..
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Beautiful and sadππππ
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Thank you for your words πβ€
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Truly beautiful and heartfelt, just sad that you felt like that, perhaps too I resonatedπ
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I’m glad that you felt the emotions behimd the words. There are times when we feel that way but sooner of later we all realize that we all are precious and beautiful…..
Your words mean a lot ππ
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I did, and of course, it passes eventually and the other side is wonderful. Thank you for such beautiful writing and wordsπ
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So glad to know you liked it.
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So deep feelings π
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Thanks for feeling that way πβ€
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So heartfelt and beautifully written.β€οΈ
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Glad to hear that . Thanks for your appreciation πβ€
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My pleasure.β€οΈ
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“… I was just lonely, but not alone.” There is an ocean between those two realities, but if we can bridge them, there is no sea that we cannot sail…
π―π²ποΈ
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I agree.π
There’s a huge difference between being lonely and being alone, but many a times we misunderstand our situation and end up giving up. So, its basicslly on us how we take up the things…..
Putting it together we may be lonely at times but it’s hard to say we are alone cuz there’s always a desire inside which is holding us strong. So yeah, we are not alone because our inner conscious is there with us. (at least there’s a little sparkle inside even at the hardest of times )
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π―π²ποΈ
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Beautiful Aanchal!
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Thank you π
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This one is the best and relatable….
Whenever I read your poetry, I feel so so soooo good…β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Ohhh, my dear friend, I’ve lost all my words. Thank you for appreciating me….
I love you girlβ€
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Heartbreakingly beautiful, Aanchal β€οΈ
I loved this
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Hehe, glad to know you loved it. Means a lot……πβ€β€
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You’re most welcome π
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Oh my, Aanchal, this is such a raw and powerful piece. Beautiful, my friend. β€
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Thank you so much for your appreciation. It’s pleasure hearing that. π€π
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You’re very welcome, my friend. It is my pleasure.β€οΈπ€
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Pen and paper rather than the trigger⦠oh mate what a heartbreaking poem and one which I 100% relate to.
Letβs both continue to use our pens and write βaccidental poetryβ ππ»
Sharon π
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Thank you Ma’am for your precious wordsπβ€οΈ. I’m glad to know you can think of something while reading this. And yes, let’s both keep on loving our pen and using it for the best…..π
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Amen to that ππ»
Take care π
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Thank you…. Wish you a happy and healthy life.π€
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OMG!! Your blog is soooooo pretty!!!! Great post!!!πππ
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Thank you for your beautiful comment π€π€
Glad to know you liked it…..β€οΈβ€οΈ
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You’re welcome! Yes I do like it!ππ
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I think I have commented here earlierβ¦
Hello Aanchal Singh,
Today is yours. Use it in the way you want. βBe the voiceβ.
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Hlw …
I didn’t receive any……
Thank you for your precious words π. Wish you the same ……ππ
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Ok.
Check spam in β commentsβ of the wp android app.
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Oh my God! There were so many … Thanks a lot ……
Haahaa, I’m just a beginner….π
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Be aware. ππ
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This brought back some painful memories. Very relatable. β₯β₯
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I’m so sorry for that ……
But yes, everyone grow and heal , that goes the same with you π€π
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True that β₯β₯
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Sometimes in this tough world of hardship we have to be our own
βsomeoneβ to wipe our tears. We must care for our self. Yes, itβs hard but there it is. At least we have shared humanity through our art.
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I appreciate your very beautiful thoughts….
You are right. We have to be our own someone. It’s pretty hard sometimes but we heal, we grow and we rise all the time. Indeed, we’ve shared humanity through our art and what can be more beautiful than this… Thanks a lot for your precious thoughts β€οΈπβ€οΈ
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YW
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Oh my, it is so well written! It is a really beautiful poem, Aanchal!ππ
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment πβ€οΈ
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How I wish that with the development of genetics we could wipe out the pain of living with diseases. Love your resolve to be The Voice.
Thank you.
Joanna
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Thank you for visiting. I too wish that. How’d your health now? I came to know that you were in hospital via your post…. Stay safe , stay healthy……
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This is so well put in a a simplistic way. Iβm sure everyone has experienced this some time in their life.
Beautiful writing ππ»
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Many thanks…. Felt great knowing you liked it….. Yes, I gues everyone has gone through it and came up stronger……πβ€οΈ
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Yes for sure! Keep writing! π
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Sure ….
I’m unable to open your site π€
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Oops! Not sure why it’s happening.
Try this link maybe
https://wordsbeyondthesight.wordpress.com/blog-2/
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Yes, I’m able to follow you from this. Check out your web address in account settings. Maybe that would work …..
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Wow… This is beautiful.. well expressed…
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Thank you.
Glad to know you liked it ……ππ
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Great post Aanchal
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Thanks a lot ππβ€οΈ
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This is so beautiful and full of raw emotion. And totally relatable. I love it.π₯π
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Many thanks! Pleased to know you loved it……
Thanks for feeling the emotions behind this… So kind of you πβ€οΈ
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Sure β¨
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A lovely display of self-compassion π
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Thank you. Glad to know you liked it πβ€οΈ
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Well I certainly hope you are doing better. Start writing again!
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Thanks for checking up on regular basis. Truly means a lot. I’m doing great. How about you? I will be getting back to it now soon
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Not bad actually when I consider four vacations are scheduled for the coming six months.
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